You’ve written a paper about
what you think has the biggest influence on how others perceive an individual;
the Toulmin model is followed, and it’s clear what the specific elements are,
and how the reasoning of the paper is structured; a heading is on the first
page, along with a title; there’s a clear introduction that makes a
statement/argument/thesis; body paragraphs are clearly structured to advance
that point, whether it’s deductive, inductive, or analogical; 3
sources/evidence are incorporated where necessary; MLA format is used both in
text and also in a Work Cited page at the end; the writing is grammatically
correct, and proofreading has been thorough; a reflection follows the works
cited.
